Dear Mr. McCarthy,
It seems that the work of literature we refer to as "The Road" portrays mankind after an unfullfilling apocalypse. The world does not come to an end, but rather is placed in a state of destruction and chaos; one that leaves few survivors and many traitors to what we call society in the present. As any realistic fictional novel, your story has it's flaws, but presents itself to be interesting none the less. We could come up with many ideas for how the members of society would react if the base of society were to be anulled; 'The Road' just happens to be one of those that show humans in a terrible light, but also one that sheds good will every now and then.
The only issue I see would be the way the story is told. It may be confusing at times, but nevertheless, the basic ideas behind it are more than adequate for the recognition it's recieved.
Regards,
A fellow reader to your novel
"your story has it's flaws"
ReplyDeleteWhat a jerk.